A birthday wish
Writing by RON on May 22, 2009
The chase was on and i was running as fast as I could. After running for a while, I came across to a dead and had no place to go. He pointed out the gun at me and fired. Bang! Bang! Bang! Three shots were fired and none missed. I fell on the ground and everything went hazy..
He walked close to me. Sat in front of me, took off his hat and smiled.
“y o u l o o k s c a r e d R o n?” His voice echoed.
He grabbed my shirt and pulled me up. He looked into my eyes. I could barely see as my vision went blurry. I struggle but managed to say
who are you?
“Look closer you fool”. He replied.
----- my phone woke me up. Knight was calling. I didn’t pick up. Went straight to the wash room. Splashed cold water on my face. I was thinking about the dream! It wasn’t over. I looked at the mirror. Splashed some more water on my face. Who was he? I questioned myself.
Ring! Ring! Knight called again and I picked up this time.
- Dude! where were you? he yelled.
- I was trying to take a nap!
- It should be day time in your place and you’re sleeping?
- yea. I worked till late last night and didn’t go to work. Wait a min! it should be mid night at your place, isn’t?
- that’s the reason I called dude! I just had a weirdest dream and you won’t believe what I just saw.
- please don’t tell me you just tried to kill me!
- HOLY JAMBO! How the hell you guessed that?
- I didn’t guess dude! I was there in your dream.
- what?
- forget it. tell me watup!
- no no no! tell me, how the hell you guessed it?
- can’t explain it dude. I think we both were dreaming at the same phase.
- you mean. You saw me chasing you and shoot you?
- no. I was trying to figure out who was that guy. So, how did it end? Did I die in your part?
- I couldn’t finish it either. I called you right after I woke up from my dream.
- oh great! aright! Dude. I think I’ll go for a drink. Feeling fuzzy. Talk to ya later.
- hold on!
- what?
- aren’t you forgetting something?
- umm! Yea. my wallet. Thanks.
- No. not your wallet!
- then?
- it’s 22nd May dude!
- what about it?
- figure it out. Bye. And call me when you do.
- Aright. I’m on it.
------ I came out of my house and went straight to the pub. Ordered Vodka. And then I suddenly realized that date. 22nd May. It’s knight birthday. Called him straight away.
- you figured it out, didn’t you?
- Happy birthday dude.
- thanks. I wish you were here. I’ve got all my 3 girl friends lined up for dates today. Yay!
- lol. some people just never change. You go have fun with them mate. I’ll send you a gift later.
- gift? From BD? what gift are you planning to send?
- I’ll write a blog for you.
- lol. seriously?
- yea. promise. Will do it after I go back home.
- aright. Cool. Thanks. Catch you later then. Bye.
- you go have fun today. Bye.
------ I came home and start writing this for knight. And then I thought, he deserve a better gift than just a simple blog. So here it is.
“ Knight is a very good potential writer. He’s still novice but he has the gist a writer needs to start his career. Unfortunately he loves to write about things which gamers don't pay much attention and which Love! If he were in any other forum relates to the subject Love, he would've been a better writer by now. but he preferred to stick to us and help our community grow bigger. So, those of you haven’t read the story he is currently working with, I recommend you read it. he needs our support and guidance, so that he can be a better writer in future.
Read this article, as it’s not too long and give him some proper feedback. He needs to know where he is making mistakes and what should he improve particularly. I’ve made it easier for you guy and have his first 5 chapters as PDF”
Sorry for the long blog and thanks in advance for helping out a very potential writer.
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